This happened to my buddy, Erp-Erp

Absolutely peak CINEMA material over here!!!
This isn't as sparkly or shiny as most popular animations are or smooth and refined as masterpieces. But! You showed your whole skill set within this animation, you used what you have in your person and what you can do to make something so entertaining to watch. I suggest you experiment and discover more materials (editing software, stop motion techniques and so on) so it can reflect the imagination you have.

"Making it look good" is a skill developed overtime through studying and researching.
"Creating it up to vision" Takes passion, care and especially patience.

The full image is even better!